I wrote this part last night im not done but tell me what you think of it???

Imagine a man pure as the sun,
Walking through a world covered in filthy.
Looking left and right he is,
Scared of what he must do.

Look at yourselves now,
And what your doing.
Are you listening to him,
Or just doin the same old things.

Pay a heed to his life,
Its the way yours should be like.
Have you got the story right,
Or is it just a big mistake.