I wrote somethin... act like you love it

March 04 2006

Shhh...


listen to the rain,


listen close as it calls your name,


hear the whistle of wind blow down the street,


make a path of destruction all but discreet,


it starts at your toes and ends at your mind,


taking it all, leaving nothing behind,


it gets to your thigh and causes a bruise,


from your last soccer game you happened to lose,


it gets to your waiste and sees the mistakes,


that you and some other and lust seemed to make,


the stomach is calm as your funnel arrives,


it sees butterflies of holding hands on long winter nights,


two veins up just on the left,


there lies a hear that ceases to rest,


it sees your emotions that broke it in half,


a bracket, a three, intercepted by a slash (</3>)


the eyes that saw heaven and the lips that kissed fate,


seldom compare to the mind that awaits,


the funnel then stops for its now met its match,


broken momentos and black and white photographs,


it sees a mom and dad divorcing and tears in your eyes,


and black and white clothing when your brother took his own life,


the funnel packs up but refuses to leave,


the funnel is your life... just you failed to see.




ok so i know it sucks... but act like you love it... i could use the ego boost... lol






p.s. New crushes= AM-ah_zing

Teresa Smith

March 04 2006
That was really really really well written. =) muy bien. And I'm not kidding...I really liked it. And you're going to have to tell me ALL about this <b>new crush.</b> <marquee>&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;<marquee>

justin daniels

March 04 2006
I like it,not just sayin it. And who's your lady friend?

Sarah

March 04 2006
Yeh thats good, it was very descriptive, i liked it ... I <3 poems :)

Addie

March 04 2006
you read me that one a couple of days ago i feel speicsl lol <3 i really liek ut.. but you already knew that <33

Anna Miller

March 05 2006
you know, it's not that bad

Kelly

March 05 2006
i dont get it. HEYY is taht the one u wrote taht one time && u let me read it on AIM?? i think it is? or it sounds like it. but yeah. i STILL dont get it. =o/

Sam Vannouvong

March 05 2006
o0f course i miss you!! wen will u b bacc?? hows daniel mckee?

Jessica Hunter

March 05 2006
i dont get it lol <3

Lin-Z HackneY

March 06 2006
hey guess what chris.... your as cool as a day sipping starbuchs and watching bambi in the middle of the mall... hee hee<3 good luck with adding that girl to ur lifer...there was a wierd thing in that sentence adding...minus the ng + the e..aw im so cute...