I wrote song, please tell me how it reads!

November 12 2005

Here's something I wrote guys.. Tell me what you think..



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'Jimmy Bellan'

Here goes the story,
Watch close as it unfolds...
A road off in the distance,
And where it goes, well nobody knows..
New discovery, or new existence,
Well, it's been waitin' there all along...
Been waitin' a long time, and it's come...
Its moment's come, and gone..


Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho,
Blowin' holes
In old six-four - (Yeah)
Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho
Blowin' holes
In old six-four


Well, Left here on a long trip,
Been gone a very long time..
Quite sure, I'm not the same...
But nothing is wrong inside...
See my homefront in the distance,
It's really sparklin' in my eyes...
I feel a thought brewin' my mind...
Let's burn this town of mine..


Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho,
Blowin' holes
In a quarter-inch skull - (Yeah)
Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho
Blowin' holes
In a quarter-inch skull


My brain's fried from bloodshed,
What's done, it don't feel wrong...
I feel like I'm the only one,
But I've felt like this way all along..
"What home to come back to?!
Son, don't you see what you have done?"
I look up, I say, Officer.....
I know I had some fun..


Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho
Kid went crazy
When he came back home
Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho
Kid went crazy
When he came back home


Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho
Jimmy Bellan's gone gun-ho
Jimmy Bellan has gone gun-ho
Kid's gone crazy
And he shouldna come home......
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Significance

November 14 2005
hey! what's up! lol hahaha nice song!